F/C/A/J
You have a tab that says thriiller which is pointless.
The next tab on conventions has no conventions on there whatsoever.
Non Stop has some discussion of narrative codes but they lack depth and has no discussion of stylistic codes (m/e/c/s) whatsoever.
Minority Report is better with narrative and stylistic code but still needs proof reading (e.G Todorovis spelt incorrectly and you could say more on editing and mise-en-scene)
Unknown has no narrative codes
No Country is good on narrative codes but weak on stylistic ones.
The pitch needs to be added to the site.
Title sequence analysis -
Conjuring - good analysis - note that embedded is spelt with an e and check that you have said enough about post production that is used.
Red Light - proof read spelling and also check you've added institutional context
Seven is clear but could have more background from Art of the Title
Fincher is rather poor. Vague and without any relevant detail.
No preliminary exercise or pitch or audience feedback.
You have a tab that says thriiller which is pointless.
The next tab on conventions has no conventions on there whatsoever.
Non Stop has some discussion of narrative codes but they lack depth and has no discussion of stylistic codes (m/e/c/s) whatsoever.
Minority Report is better with narrative and stylistic code but still needs proof reading (e.G Todorovis spelt incorrectly and you could say more on editing and mise-en-scene)
Unknown has no narrative codes
No Country is good on narrative codes but weak on stylistic ones.
The pitch needs to be added to the site.
Title sequence analysis -
Conjuring - good analysis - note that embedded is spelt with an e and check that you have said enough about post production that is used.
Red Light - proof read spelling and also check you've added institutional context
Seven is clear but could have more background from Art of the Title
Fincher is rather poor. Vague and without any relevant detail.
No preliminary exercise or pitch or audience feedback.
O/J/R
Preliminary completed and on site
Well structured titles analyses but see what you can add on the design and visual aesthetic and post production as well as on which people/roles are included on the titles.
The conventions information is too vague and brief. There are more narrative and stylistic conventions you could discuss that can easily be researched.
Film analyses has no impact section. Also you need more on narrative codes.
Pitch and audience feedback is there but there's no impact section.
Preliminary completed and on site
Well structured titles analyses but see what you can add on the design and visual aesthetic and post production as well as on which people/roles are included on the titles.
The conventions information is too vague and brief. There are more narrative and stylistic conventions you could discuss that can easily be researched.
Film analyses has no impact section. Also you need more on narrative codes.
Pitch and audience feedback is there but there's no impact section.
C/A/N/V
No preliminary task
Nothing on the blog
Blank conventions page
Analyses of thrillers : some discussion of enigma. Make sure you have been thorough in desribing action/enigma codes as well as the creation of suspense. Also check that you have been specific in discussing m/e/c/s its effect and impact on your work.
Titles - Snatch and Zombieland analyses need to be checked according to the model answer on the site
No audience feedback to your pitch
No preliminary task
Nothing on the blog
Blank conventions page
Analyses of thrillers : some discussion of enigma. Make sure you have been thorough in desribing action/enigma codes as well as the creation of suspense. Also check that you have been specific in discussing m/e/c/s its effect and impact on your work.
Titles - Snatch and Zombieland analyses need to be checked according to the model answer on the site
No audience feedback to your pitch
Group 1 : Freddie/Jack/Cameron Aaron
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Group 2: Ollie/Jack/Ryan
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Group 3 : Nick/Conor/Alex/Enzo
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Group 2: Ollie/Jack/Ryan
www.mediajfs.weebly.com
Group 3 : Nick/Conor/Alex/Enzo
www.canvmedia.weebly.com