FCAJ
Jack - needs more on technical codes (m/e/c/s and on real films that influenced you)
Aaron has to complete the first question and should have more on class, especially the representation of the middle and criminal classes
Cameron should include more on stages of audience feedback for his question on attracting the audience - e.g to pitches and the rough cut
Freddie should have a lot he can say about planning (storyboarding and analysis), production (lighting/camerawork/costume and set design) and post production
OJR
Ryan has made minimal effort and needs to complete his questions for Wednesday
Ollie needs to add more specific feedback from focus groups on what changes were made to the pitch and rough cut as a result of their feedback
Jack has questions to finish and needs more on post production when discussing new technology
ACEN
Alex needs to complete his question before Wednesday
Connor has to proof read his carefully. The question on technology is rushed and careless - you need to check the example questions and respond in detail. The question on audience feedback needs more on feedback to the rough cut.
Enzo is confused about which are his questions. Both need to be completed by Wednesday. Check the web pages for distribution and production companies making clear why they'd be interested in your film
Nick needs to proofread his response and check it against the example response on my site