Ryan/Jack/Ollie
q1. Needs more on action/enigma codes and more on m/e/c/s
q2. is better but this is a difficult question, see if you can addanything on how m/e/c/s reinforces conventions and on how it resembles other thrillers
q3. distribution is better
q4.you still have to go on the bbfc site and your explanation is confusing
q5 still needs to be more detailed and systematic
q6 is far too brief
q7 is poor
Aaron, Jack, Freddie, Cameron
Jack has improved Q1 but could still use more examples of real thrillers, more on a range of enigmas (e.g will the protagonist be discovered) and more examples of m/e/c/s
Q2. Check terminology - high angle not low for danger
Q3 - check expression e.g 'distrusting our film' could still have more appropriate examples of British thrillers
Jack and Aaron have produced the most evidence of work
Q4. expression is confusing and there should be a lot more detail on audience feedback - you're overlapping with Q6
Q5. Needs a lot more detail on technologies used
Q6. Still hasn't looket at BBFC site and related closely to film
Q7. Could have more on m/e/c/s and conventions that influenced the planning (narrative/style/titles)
q1. Needs more on action/enigma codes and more on m/e/c/s
q2. is better but this is a difficult question, see if you can addanything on how m/e/c/s reinforces conventions and on how it resembles other thrillers
q3. distribution is better
q4.you still have to go on the bbfc site and your explanation is confusing
q5 still needs to be more detailed and systematic
q6 is far too brief
q7 is poor
Aaron, Jack, Freddie, Cameron
Jack has improved Q1 but could still use more examples of real thrillers, more on a range of enigmas (e.g will the protagonist be discovered) and more examples of m/e/c/s
Q2. Check terminology - high angle not low for danger
Q3 - check expression e.g 'distrusting our film' could still have more appropriate examples of British thrillers
Jack and Aaron have produced the most evidence of work
Q4. expression is confusing and there should be a lot more detail on audience feedback - you're overlapping with Q6
Q5. Needs a lot more detail on technologies used
Q6. Still hasn't looket at BBFC site and related closely to film
Q7. Could have more on m/e/c/s and conventions that influenced the planning (narrative/style/titles)